Review of "Two Moons in August"

"Your mom away somewhere?"

     In Two Moons in August, Martha Brooks explores what it's like to lose someone close to the heart. Ever since her mother passed away almost a year ago, Sidonie's life has been awful. Dad is rarely home anymore, Bobbi has organized the kitchen drawers, and the only person she can talk to is her eight-year-old cat. Any friendship she and her sister once had has vanished, especially now that Bobbi is spending so much time with her strictly-best-friend Phil. When a new boy moves in across the street and wrecks her book, all Sidonie can think of is her mother's signature dripping down the front page. And the fact that this boy, Kieran, is cute. And that she really, really needs to fix her family before things get even worse. But relationships can't be fixed with a hammer and nails, so if she's going to make things right, she has to start with herself--and all the baggage that entails.

     From the first page, it's evident that Sidonie has only just begun to heal after her mother's death. She's still raw over the birthday sweater she refused to try on when asked. It doesn't help that it happened the day she turned fifteen, forever linking the two events in her mind. Bobbi's temper has turned sour now that she's taken over as unofficial housekeeper, and without her dad around to help her grieve, Sidonie's only escape is through books. Her emotions are so prominent in the writing that even readers whose families are intact should have little trouble connecting with her. The others are a little harder to relate to, given their slightly less pleasant personalities, but overall the effect is the same.

     The writing style used throughout this tale is somewhat curious. On the one hand, it's rich with emotion, making clear how Sidonie's world works and exactly what she feels about it. The downside, though, is that this is somehow achieved with a passive narrative voice. Even with a thousand churning waves of turmoil clearly visible in every word, the audience is kept at a distance, able to empathize with the characters yet not quite able to submerge completely within the setting. This has the unfortunate effect of reducing the urgency of the climax and generally reducing the tension, even when things start getting crazy.

     This depiction of Sidonie's summer is a mixed bag of highly clean and slightly questionable content. Overall, the language is relatively clean, with only a few curses dropped here and there. There's no violence to speak of, though at one point two characters find their lives in danger. The biggest factor to consider is the romance. Even in 1959, the year our story takes place, social restrictions on physical contact are few and far between. Kieran and Sidonie's first kiss quickly escalates, but she puts a stop to it before things get out of control. Bobbi, on the other hand, is not so conservative. Thankfully, descriptions of her romantic adventures are thoughtfully skimmed over. They do, however, play a big part in her own private plot line.

     I would recommend this book to readers fifteen and up who want a short read with lots of heart. While the writing style keeps readers at a short distance, Sidonie and her family deal with a tangible sense of grief and enough realistic problems to retain a strong hook. Although there's a bit of romance, the bigger story is about Bobbi, Sidonie, and their father figuring out how to move on after an enormous tragedy. For intriguing characters and a good plot, Martha Brooks' Two Moons in August deserves three stars.

Review of "Monument 14"

"She smashed the bus right through the glass doors of the Greenway."

     In Monument 14 by Emmy Laybourne, ordinary kids from all walks of life are thrown together in the most intense survival situation they could have imagined. Dean and his fourteen-year-old brother have been looking out for each other ever since the world started going downhill. Sure, they have their parents, but Mom and Dad can't watch over them around the clock. When a freak storm of giant hailstones destroy Dean's school bus and lands Alex's in the local Greenway superstore, they're on their own. And when Mrs. Wooly, Alex's driver, leaves the two buses of kids alone in the Greenway so she can get help, there are no other grown-ups to calm people down or maintain order. Dean knows he isn't a leader, and so does everyone else. However, as time goes by and conditions grow steadily worse, a leader may not be what this group needs. What they need is glue to keep them together--and that is something Dean can provide.

     As far as apocalypses go, there's something to be said for Laybourne's straightforward approach. By the time the first chapter is through, enormous hailstones have destroyed one school bus, injured a handful of students, and forced a kindly driver into hardcore survival mode. Every few days, things outside the Greenway grow progressively worse, leaving the store's unlikely inhabitants to deal with the consequences. Sometimes this means setting up a work schedule or boarding up a door; other times, it means tying people up to protect the group. There's little explanation of why everything is going downhill, and that's what makes this story so realistic.

     Dean's narrative style is very direct. He tells us what happens, when it happens, and why it happens--at least, as far as he can tell. His personality bleeds through every page, grounding the fantastical work in what could easily pass for reality. Rather than repeatedly note how long they've been living in the Greenway, each page keeps track at the bottom, making narrative jumps to later events far less confusing than they might have been. It also plunges readers directly into the moment, filling them with sights, sounds, and scents that flesh out the setting and characters in a matter of sentences. Every emotion is conveyed convincingly, from heartbreak to sheer terror or even brotherly love. And because the cast is so diverse, finding relatable characters to cheer for is relatively simple.

     Unfortunately, there are a lot of things in this little story that pre-readers should look out for. Language can get heated, and though the strongest terms replace key letters with hyphens, plenty of the medium-level vulgarity is reported as-is. Violence, too, is mildly graphic; while there's no gore, characters pull no punches and leave a bit of a mess after each fight, which they have to clean up later. There's also the minor fact that the apocalypse isn't over when the hail stops falling, and the disasters that follow are extremely dangerous. However, the primary focus is on the Greenway kids rather than the outside world, so this threat is toned down immensely in favor of the more interesting interpersonal drama.

     The biggest factor, though, is romance. From the start, Dean has a crush on a pretty girl he's certain doesn't know he exists. Even with the world falling apart around him, he's excited to think that he'll be spending time near her until everything is set to rights. And he isn't the only one with these kinds of thoughts. Shortly into their stay, a girl from the local middle school decides it's time to spice things up by dressing uncleanly. While Dean views this as a sad sign of immaturity, some of the other boys find this intriguing. At one point, our protagonist walks in on a very private moment that, while not described in detail, is laced with dialogue that fills in most of the blanks. Later, one person tries to take advantage of another. While I'd hesitate to call the latter a trigger scene, potential readers should be wary.

     I would recommend this book to older teenagers looking for a survival tale about smart kids doing their best in a world that's falling to pieces. It features an unusual setting, a highly diverse cast, and a myriad of complicated relationships that contribute just as much to the tension as the catastrophes beyond the Greenway doors. The writing style ties everything together and holds on tight, while the extraordinary intelligence of the characters makes following along an intriguing journey. If it weren't for the heap of flag-worthy content and Dean's never-ending fixation on his crush, this might be a brilliant novel. As it is, Emmy Laybourne's Monument 14 is a great book deserving four stars.

Review of "Timebound"

"I've never seen you this young."

     As far as Rysa Walker's young adult novel Timebound is concerned, you don't have to be from the future to travel through time and space. Prudence Katherine Pierce-Keller, commonly known as "Kate", is an ordinary girl with two ordinary divorced parents. She spends half her time at Dad's and half at Mom's, attending a prestigious private school thanks to her father's new position as a math teacher. When Mom's mother, also named Katherine, appears from the woodwork with news that she has cancer, Kate quickly agrees that spending time with the old woman is a good idea. What she doesn't know is that Katherine has a secret--and it's tied to the medallion around her neck, the one Mom swears doesn't glow blue. It has to do with the stranger who mugs her on the Metro, and his friend, who acts like he's been in love with her for years. If Katherine is right, someone from the future has been messing with the timeline, and if Kate doesn't stop them, the people she loves won't die. They'll have never existed.

     Kate's adventure is not the average time-travel story. Her grandmother is a historian from CHRONOS, a company in the future which sends observers to experience and take notes on the most crucial points in history. They don't change anything--or they aren't supposed to. Ever since she was stranded in the past, Katherine has been fighting to bring the timeline back on track. The only problem with that plan is that she can't travel through time without going to the future first...and, as far as her medallion is concerned, that's now impossible. Kate, on the other hand, has a strong, second-hand strain of the time-travelling gene, which means she can jump whenever and wherever she wants. Her only mentors are an old woman and her roommate, while her enemy has an army at his back. The only person she can confide in is a boy who won't know she exists if she succeeds. Win or lose, someone is going to get the short end of the stick. Kate can only hope it isn't her.

     There is no single time and place Kate has to visit in order to save the world. For now, her main focus is the 1893 World's Fair in Chicago, where an assassin from the future and a serial killer are both about to strike. The setting is beautifully done, with so much detail and historical context that readers may lose themselves in this vivid glimpse of the past. It isn't just the backdrop, either. The people Kate encounters are well-rounded and dynamic, no matter how long or brief their acquaintance might be. They feel like people on a fundamental level whether they're from the past, present, future, or some strange blend thereof. And that makes Kate's world authentic.

     Like many of its YA counterparts, this story boasts an impressive love triangle. First in line for Kate's hand is Kiernan, a boy from the past and her alternate future, who is irrevocably in love with her. He's also the grandfather of Katherine's roommate, which should be weird but somehow isn't. Even with his Kate absent from this new timeline, Kiernan is devoted to the cause of righting the wrongs of the wayward time travellers who are destroying history. Then there's Trey, a boy from the present who quickly falls in love with Kate, but who stands to lose everything once she sets things right. Both boys are startlingly realistic and essential to the plot, which is deliciously refreshing. The romance doesn't proceed beyond kissing, though two characters plan to change that once the timeline is stable. Foul language is kept to a minimum, and the violence is kept carefully PG-13.

     I would recommend this book to anyone looking for a fascinating novel about love, time travel, and the lengths someone will go to in order to keep their family safe. There's action, romance, and a great deal of American history that hasn't made it into modern history books. The characters are realistic, lovable, and dynamic, full of subtle idiosyncrasies that make them stand out. With high stakes on both a personal and world-wild scale, readers will be glued to the edges of their seats for every page. For a relatable cast,  expansive worldbuilding, and a breathtaking plot, Rysa Walker's Timebound more than deserves five stars.

Review of "Another Faust"

“I’m looking for an unattainable soul…a soul that’s not for sale.”

     From Daniel and Dina Naveri comes a new kind of fairy tale: Another Faust, a cautionary story about the consequences of giving into our darkest desires. Victoria, Christian, Belle, and Valentin were only children when Madam Vileroy offered to sweep them away to another life. Now they are teenagers—and ready to cash in on their deal. At Marlowe, an elite preparatory school in Manhattan, they will be surrounded by the smartest, most talented youth in the state, along with countless opportunities to prove their superiority. Whether they desire power, beauty, sports prowess, or a good laugh, Madam Vileroy is more than willing to accommodate their wishes...for a price. When Belle’s sister begins to ask probing questions about Vileroy’s deals, the governess decides it’s time to step up the game. Bicé is the only one who hasn't sold her soul for her powers--and while this makes her a target, she could also be the key to their salvation.

     The relative obscurity of the Faustian Deal legend makes this an intriguing premise. Though it’s obvious from the start that Madam Vileroy is wicked to the core, her “adopted” children choose to overlook that fact. For Victoria, the most important thing in the world is political and academic success, and she’ll sacrifice anything to get it. In return for a few far-from-harmless practical jokes and whatever else her governess desires, she is given the gift of Cheating, which allows her to read minds and stay ahead of her opponents. Valentin cares more for flexibility in life, and uses his ability to Lie to skip back in time and change the immediate future, often many times over. For Belle, nothing is worth more than beauty, even if it comes from pain or means the love she receives is merely an illusion. Christian, on the other hand, has grown to hate his ability to Steal the life force of others, preferring to win sports games without supernatural assistance.

     Then there’s Bicé, Belle’s formerly-identical twin. Bicé has been given the art of language, but unlike her so-called siblings she uses it to brighten everyone’s day. As the plot continues and the other Faust children Cheat, Lie, and glamour their way to success, she Hides in infinite folds of time, spending countless days learning different tongues. All this changes when she sees the black spot on Christian’s chest--the same spot Belle has, right over her heart. Only Bicé’s skin is clear of the stain, while Christian’s is on its way out. The minute they begin investigating why, their enemy makes her move. Meanwhile, Belle, Valentin, and Victoria fight ever harder to reach the pinnacle of glory in their respective circles. If Bicé and Christian defeat Vileroy, the other’s will finally be free of her dark magic. The only problem is that they might not want to be freed.

     Unfortunately, despite the drama and trickery that each teen faces, something is missing from the writing. This may be an unfortunate side effect of the narrative style, or it could be that the overarching plot is lacking in coherence. So much time is spent on the individual struggles of the Faust children that the importance of the greater conflict is often lost or diminished, leaving Bicé’s mission to free herself and her family unfairly dry. The voice used in relating the adventures of these young people is also somewhat passive, lessening the effect of the more major plot points.

     Despite the subject matter, there isn’t much questionable content within the Nayeris’ novel. Belle’s Faustian Deal grants her beauty at the cost of self-inflicted pain, and she uses it to snag the most popular boy in school. Unfortunately, her ability also leaves her with a disgusting scent that keeps him from kissing her. Meanwhile, Valentin uses his ability to Lie to toy with a girl who is quickly falling in love with him. This results in a single kiss for amusement's sake. He also briefly mistreats another girl to discover what she finds attractive. Christian’s aptitude for Stealing is at constant odds with his kind spirit, and rarely results in someone getting hurt. Madam Vileroy tries to change him by providing a live training dummy, but he refuses to Steal from it. Victoria, on the other hand, has no problem brawling another student to get what she wants, though the fight is not graphic. While rare, moderately vulgar language is occasionally exchanged between enemies.

     I would recommend this book to teens looking for an engaging story where the heroes have to decide what kind of people they want to be. There’s just enough of a connection to the old legend of the Faustian Deal to count this as a fairy tale, yet the modern setting and relative obscurity of the original make this version mysterious and compelling. Even though the writing style detracts somewhat from the plot, each character’s internal arc is intriguing enough to hold a reader’s attention on its own. Together, they weave a tapestry of love, hate, twisted desires, and damaged moral compasses. Daniel and Dina Nayeri did a great job with Another Faust, earning it four stars.

Review of "The Wizard of Oz"

“There's a cyclone coming, Em."

     L. Frank Baum’s The Wizard of Oz is a fairy tale in which one young girl changes a magical realm forever. Dorothy Gale lives with her Aunt Em and Uncle Henry on their faded little farm in Kansas, but life with the Gales isn’t as exciting as she’d like. The sky is gray, the fields are gray, and the only happy thing around is her pet dog, Toto. When a cyclone sweeps Dorothy and Toto to a world full of color and magic, it seems at first that things have taken a turn for the better. That is, until she realizes that she’ll have to abandon all hope of seeing her family again if she wishes to stay. Determined to find a way home, Dorothy sets course for the City of Emeralds at the center of Oz, where a great wizard lives. But the Wizard of Oz doesn’t do things for free, so even if she makes it to the City alive, she’ll have to do something in return. It will take trust, friendship, and a great deal of kindness to send Dorothy back to Kansas, which means she’ll need friends to do it…friends who must sacrifice who they once were if ever they are to succeed.

     Some old-fashioned fairy tales feature cruel villains, terrifying beasts, and unsavory endings for those on the side of evil. Not so with The Wizard of Oz. In this charming adventure, what stands out most is a sense of wonder. Oz is a breathtaking place with an unimaginably diverse landscape, which a multitude of equally diverse peoples and cultures call home. From the china-people with their fragile bodies to short men whose heads spring forward to repel invaders, no one is too strange or incredible to settle in this world. The villains, meanwhile, are wicked yet one-dimensional, and can do no harm to Dorothy, who early on is given a good witch’s kiss for protection. Since all of her travelling companions are either intimidating or feel no pain, little permanent damage is done to them, either.

     However, do not think this means nothing bad can happen to our young heroine and her friends. The Scarecrow wants brains, the Tin Woodman a heart, the Lion some courage, and Dorothy to return home—and with every passing adventure, it becomes less and less certain that they can find what they desire in the Emerald City. Indeed, they might not even make it there. For while malicious villains may hesitate to harm Dorothy, nature is not so particular. Fields of poppies, great ravines, and hungry animals all do their best to keep the foursome from their destination. So while there’s nothing graphic within these pages, there is always the fear that they may be wrong. They may not make it to the City, after all. And even if they do, who is to say the Wizard of Oz can grant them their wishes—or that he’ll want to?

     There is no foul language, romance, or violence. Even the defeat of the Wicked Witch of the East is an accident, and mentioned in passing rather than described. The primary antagonist, however, takes a bit more effort to defeat, and the epic battle between heroine and enemy is shorter and clean. More important to the essence of this book is the sense of wonder that such a place as Oz exists, and the worry that Dorothy may never get home.

     I would recommend this book to children and tweens looking for a fun adventure in a world full of marvelous people, places, and achievements. Teenagers and adults might like it as well, but the tale is most definitely directed toward children. Dorothy is a lighthearted character who possesses a great deal of kindness and curiosity, while her friends each exhibit unique traits and quirks which alternate between causing conflict, saving the day, and making the reader feel as though they were walking right alongside the four heroes. Though it’s a little simple, many fairy tales are, and L. Frank Baum’s The Wizard of Oz makes up for it with interesting characters and a world made to dazzle. It deserves four stars.

Review of "Hammer of Witches"

“It is just a story.”

     For the young protagonist of Hammer of Witches, Shana Mlawski’s exciting historical fantasy tale, stories are nothing more than works of fiction. He didn’t always believe that, of course, but Baltasar Infante is fourteen now and knows better. That is, until he’s kidnapped by the Malleus Maleficarum, a team of witch hunters who seem to think that Bal is harboring the Moorish spellcaster Amir al-Katib. When a burst of magic summons a golem straight from Uncle Diego’s bedtime stories, Bal is thrust into a world he could never have imagined. On the run from the Spanish Inquisition with nothing except a scroll, his uncle’s stories, and al-Katib’s personal half-genie, Bal must make his way westward in order to survive. Along the way, he also has to keep his magic a secret and save the world from a terrible evil. As a Storyteller, he has the power to bring any story ever told to life—but there are so many stories about al-Katib that he doesn’t know what to believe. Is he a hero? A villain? Bal’s father? There’s only one way to find out, assuming he doesn’t kill Bal first.

     Baltasar is a prime example of a protagonist who’s quite unwillingly catapulted into the adventure of a lifetime. As far as he knows, he’s the son of two Jewish immigrants who converted to Catholicism to escape the Inquisition. He has no powers, no importance whatsoever. Then he accidentally summons a creature of legend, and everything changes. Through his journey across the Atlantic and his unexpected friendship with the half-genie Jinniyah, Bal gradually learns to control his newfound abilities. More importantly, he begins to discover who he is when all else is stripped away. Along the way, readers get a glimpse of Spain in the 1490s, learn about countless fairy tales and stories, and even learn a bit about Christopher Columbus’s famous voyage to the Americas. Couple this with Jinniyah’s own personal development and that of another Storyteller Bal meets on his journey, and the cast of this piece quickly becomes complex and quite diverse.

     The historical aspect of this journey is at once deeply layered and beautifully simple. At no point does the strength of the context waver: the setting is very clearly Spain, from the gorgeously described streets to the back alleys and the tavern full of sailors. The bedtime stories Uncle Diego has imparted upon Baltasar are from all over the world, ranging from the testing of Job to the creation of the Arabian hameh. Before he knows it, Baltasar sets forth across the sea on one of Christopher Columbus’s ships, and bears witness to the many dangers which befell Colón and his men, many of whom are based on the real-life sailors of that voyage. Then there are the Indies, populated by equally lifelike characters who show off many different facets of the indigenous Bahamian cultures. Each culture and subculture Bal is exposed to is lovingly detailed and extremely immersive, and helps shape him into an entirely new person.

     If not for a few variables intended for older audiences, this might easily be considered a children’s book. Language-wise, there is nothing more foul than a curse here and there; and as for romance, there is only a single misguided kiss. Yet it should be noted that a great deal of this novel takes place upon a ship on a long voyage, where our hero is surrounded by fully grown men. Thus there is some relatively coarse jesting, and a bit of innuendo regarding a woman named Mary. Shortly after Baltasar’s kidnapping, the Malleus Maleficarum swoop upon people he cares about, ending their lives just graphically enough that young readers might find it too unsavory, though older ones probably won’t flinch. Despite the Maleficarum’s belief, Baltasar’s magic is not witchraft. It does, however, require him to reinterpret the story he’s summoning, which leads to a somewhat blasphemous decision about the Jewish and Christian God.

     I would recommend this book to readers from their late tweens onward who are looking for a fun, fantastical adventure full of magic and self-discovery. Despite the setting, Hammer of Witches does not read like historical fiction. Baltasar and Jinniyah are lovely heroes on the journey of a lifetime, facing down foul weather, enemy warriors, and legendary monsters with equal determination. Amir al-Katib is a mysterious figure standing at the end of their path, and Bal doesn’t know whether he’s friend or foe, much less family. All these threads make for a complex plot which requires a bit of brainpower to read, but Shana Mlawski’s writing ties it all together to make a great story worthy of four stars.

Review of "Poison"

“The princess had to die.”

     In Bridget Zinn’s Poison, even the most beloved girl in the kingdom cannot be trusted. Sixteen-year-old potion master Kyra grew up alongside Princess Ariana, the royal heir. The two were best friends, once—before a vision of the future warned Kyra that nothing was as it seemed. As it happened, the only way to save the kingdom from complete destruction was to eliminate the source of the threat, which she would do by attacking Ariana with a poison dart. The only problem? For the first time in her life, Kyra missed. Now a fugitive, Kyra will do anything to get a second chance at playing the hero, even if it means teaming up with a cute stranger and following a magical pig who knows where. Add in a reclusive hermit who shows up in the most bizarre places, an untrustworthy thief, and a fellow potions master with a broken heart, and this quest just got a lot more difficult. It’s a good thing Kyra brought along her poisons—but even those won’t last forever.

     Under ordinary circumstances, one might find it hard to believe that a story about a girl trying to eliminate her best friend could possibly be funny. These circumstances, however, are far from ordinary. Nothing is ever quite predictable: friends may be enemies, enemies may be other enemies in disguise, and the key to figuring out the truth could very well be an adorable tracking pig. The humor is just subtle enough to preserve the tension and stakes, yet is woven so thoroughly throughout the plot that it’s nearly impossible to get through a chapter without at least chuckling once.

     At the same time, Zinn’s quirky fairy tale knows when to take itself seriously. The danger which threatens the kingdom is enormous, and the weight of it is ever-present, waiting to crush Kyra if she isn’t careful. Then too there are her own dark secrets, things she refuses to tell even the reader until she trusts her audience enough to spill the beans. While this occasionally leads to curious plot twists with little foreshadowing, such revelations are carefully sculpted to fit ideally into their designated place. Each may seem innocent enough on the surface, but their ramifications bring out intriguing facets of Kyra’s true character, thereby intensifying their awesome nature.

     This is a beautiful piece full of immersive settings and dynamic characters, romance and magic, and adventure beyond belief. Everything is accomplished cleanly—that is, without offensive language, graphic action scenes, or excessively intimate moments between heroine and love interest. The only thing which comes close is the moment when a young man rescues Kyra from a stream, where she has made quite a spectacle with a pig and some wet clothes. Otherwise, everyone from children to adults could easily find this tale fun and exciting.

     I would recommend this book to anyone looking for a marvelous adventure full of romance, deceit, and mystery, with plenty of humor thrown in to spice things up. It’s got smart heroes, a plot full of twists and turns, and a sweet romantic subplot that makes everything that much more believable. Oh, and don’t forget the piglet who’s along for the ride. Bridget Zinn’s Poison is a lovely fairytale-esque novel with plenty of heart, and thus deserves five golden stars.

Review of "Damsel Distressed"

“No one cares about the stepsisters’ story.”

     So claims the protagonist of Kelsey Macke’s emotional novel Damsel Distressed. When Imogen Keegan’s father announced that he was remarrying, to say she was angry would be an understatement. When he told her she’d be getting a stepsister as part of the union, she was furious. And when said stepsister, Carmella, turned away in scorn during one of the most terrifying moments in Imogen’s life, she knew beyond a doubt which part she would play in Ella’s little fairytale. Now, the day of Carmella’s return has arrived. As the wicked girl begins settling in down the hall, Imogen grows determined to avoid her at all costs. But with eating problems, depression, and a cute best friend who’s totally not into her to worry about, that’s easier said than done. Carmella is here to stay. The question is: what is Imogen going to do about it?

     The cast of this novel is exquisitely crafted. First there’s Carmella Cinder, who goes by “Ella” to play up the princess angle. She’s as wicked as any fairytale villain could hope to be, pulling no punches in her attempts to humiliate her overweight stepsister. Then there’s Grant, Imogen’s best friend and secret crush, who is easy to like and possesses a fully rounded-out personality. Alongside him are Brice and Jonathan, high school sweethearts who are fully devoted to their friends. Together, these friends have spent years working hard to bring Imogen out of the darkest corners of her mind.

     And they are dark corners indeed. Imogen has always had self-image issues, even if she doesn’t always realize that’s what they are, and Carmella’s presence in her life is enough to bring those thoughts back to the surface. While Imogen is well aware of the consequences that arise from giving in to these unhealthy emotions and desires, she also knows that the odds of her ending up with a happy ending are slim to none. She’s the ugly stepsister, after all, no matter what her friends and therapist say. No one cares about her. No one understands. In the end, the only one who controls that blade is her—which means she has to decide whether she wants control or love more desperately. Because unless she gives up one, she can’t have the other, now or ever.

     With a premise as ambitious and internally-focused as this one, it would be easy for the plot to plod along for a great while before it found some sort of life. Not so with this novel. From the beginning, where we’re introduced to Imogen, her therapist, and her problems, it’s clear that there will be plenty of structure to guide this story forward. For one thing, she works the sound booth for the school theater productions. For another, Carmella is determined to make her life miserable. And if that wasn’t enough, something big is about to go wrong in the school play—and only Imogen can fix it. But everything has consequences, even heroics. Only by figuring out who she wants to be and deciding to go for it will she ever truly find happiness.

     Sensitive readers may wish to be careful around this novel, due to the somewhat delicate nature of Imogen’s difficulties. Foremost of these is the manner in which she attempts to regain control of her life; suffice to say she once kept a collection of razor blades close at hand. In recent years, she has learned to curb the habit, but it’s always lurking just under the surface, ready to strike when she’s most vulnerable. Then too there is her trouble with food. For years, Imogen’s instinctive reaction to crises has been to eat as much junk food as she can, though the aftermath of such indulgence repulses her to a point where she almost becomes sick. However, these internal antagonists, as they were, are portrayed honestly and without reserve, making them feel more realistic and less fragile. Readers should also note that Brice and Jonathan are both boys, and play vital roles in the plot.

     I would recommend this book to anyone looking for a teenaged story of love, redemption, and the struggle to find hope in a world full of darkness. Imogen has her problems, yes, but she also has a support system of friends who read as though they’re living, breathing people rather than words on a page. Carmella, her enemy, is rotten to the core, and her attempts to ruin her stepsister’s life are, unlike in many tales, quite wicked. This is a narrative full of deep, complex emotions battling for control of a girl’s life, a struggle sure to capture the hearts and sympathies of the readers who dare peer inside. Be warned: Kelsey Macke’s Damsel Distressed is as heartwarming as it is saddening, with a heroine worth cheering on. It deserves five stars.

Review of "Paper Valentine"

“I am not the kind of person who gets haunted by anything.”

     So claims the heroine of Brenna Yovanoff’s Paper Valentine, a YA standalone in which visiting ghosts aren’t the most important event in town. What does matter is the heat, and the virus killing off the birds, and the psychopath who has started picking girls off and littering his crime scenes with cheap plastic toys. When Hannah, guided by her best friend’s morbidly curious ghost, sneaks a peek at the police photos, she is thrown into a world where no one can be trusted. After all, the Valentine Killer could be anyone—even Finny Boone, the neighborhood delinquent who has suddenly caught Hannah’s eye. Torn between caution, her growing feelings for Finny, and an insatiable desire to catch the killer, Hannah must face her own problems before she can save the day. Because while her best friend isn’t the only ghost in town, she’s the only one who can lead her to the closure she so desperately needs.

     The sleepy city of Ludlow provides the perfect backdrop for Hannah’s quest. From a gas station convenience store to the front steps of the school—closed for summer—and the enormous park where the Valentine Killer leaves his victims, every setting is exquisitely tailored to the needs of the story. Add in a dash of record-breaking heat to soak the locals through with lethargy, and the sudden panic that springs up when the bodies begin multiplying becomes nearly comedic. At the same time, though, the dark undercurrent which permeates this tale refuses to fade into the background. The girls who meet their fates are not random strangers to Hannah, nor is her determination to find their killer lacking for motivation. Sensitive to the spirit world thanks to her connection to the six-months-dead Lillian, she begins to see the victims wherever she goes. They want her to avenge them, but seeing their pain only makes her wonder: if ghosts miss the world of the living so much, why did Lillian let herself die?

     Hannah isn’t the only character asking questions. Ariel, her sister, wants to know why Big Sis is so interested in Finny Boone, the boy who spends more time in detention than in a classroom and whose spare time is generally taken up by petty theft. Finny, meanwhile, is dying to find out what a good girl like Hannah could possibly see in him. And Hannah’s group of friends, the coolest of the cool, are asking themselves who they want to be now that Lillian, their ringleader, has passed away. These complex characters lend themselves naturally to dynamic relationships, which easily earn them sympathy and respect as people in their own right.

     Despite the subject matter, there’s surprisingly little questionable content within Yovanoff’s ghost story. For one thing, the romance is clean—although there’s some kissing, the emphasis is on Finny’s reputation as a social outcast rather than his attractiveness, or his helpfulness in pushing the plot forward. This has the unfortunate effect of making him into more of a plot device than a lovable character, thereby lessening the impact he has on the narrative. Only one F-bomb is dropped, along with assorted minor swearing. Readers and pre-readers alike should note that the main characters make use of an Ouija board multiple times during their investigation, and that Lillian suffered from an eating disorder. Crime scene photos are viewed without permission, and described in detail. The final confrontation with the Valentine Killer is somewhat violent, though it doesn’t quite pack the anticipated punch.

     I would recommend this book to teens and tweens looking for a multi-layered tale about ghosts, killers, and the heartbreaking fact that we can’t save everyone. While the final act isn’t all it might have been, the premise and intriguing characters carry this one through to the end. The novel itself takes a look at troubles that plague people from all walks in life, from shaky social standings to poor life choices and dead friends who stick around to make life difficult.  There’s romance, a large array of strong themes, and more than one red herring, making Brenna Yovanoff’s Paper Valentine a good read for anyone in need of a change in pace. All these things work together to weave a strong story worth four stars.